He is monkey has
Brown eyes. The monkey has a
Black nose.
The monkey has black fur.
The monkey has black eyes
The monkey is happy because he ate
a banana
The monkey likes bananas healthy
They likes playing in the tree because it fun
And the they like to play tag in the bushes.
Hi Jordan, My name is James. I really enjoyed reading your writing about monkeys.Something I specifically liked was you writing what do monkeys eat and what the do in the forest. It made me think about when I was writing about snow leopards of what they eat and how they adapt to live in snow. Maybe next time add more ideas and write your sentence so it can make sense. Thanks for sharing your writing with me. Check out my blog post http://wpsjamesp.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHello Jordan, my name is Blake from Awahono School. I like how you have described your monkey and what it looks like and what it likes to do. Maybe next time you could use different words instead say it or he/she? Maybe you could check out my blog? https://awahonoblakeg.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteKind Regards
Blake